DUE TUE, 2/12 My Rage - Cause (Late okay – Due 2/3)
It is Monday morning and I am so sick. I ask my dad if I could stay home because I don't feel good. So my dad leaves the house. I think to myself saying " what is there to do now". I go onto the computer and go to Myspace.com. There is no one on and I feel like nobody in the world will talk to me. I start to get mad and want to go back to school. But at the same time I realize that I am t sick to even go to school. So I wait and think and wait and thing some more and come up with a solution. I will play online with my PS2 but then I see that nobody is on because they are all at school.
So I just play my games alone in the house with my dog by my side acting like a cushin for my tired arm. Hours go by and I am still in a rage from not having anyone to play with. I hear my dad coming to the driveway. That was a horrible sound to here, I didn't want him to come home because I am starting to have fun playing my games. Now I am even more mad because I won't be able to play my games.
2 comments:
niiiiccce...
i know how you feel, i hate it when that happens.
good job on the paragraph.
this is an interesting rage. i myself have never really experienced the game part, but i do know how you feel about parents coming home right when you start to enjoy yourself. I think that you could use a few more descriptive words and metaphores. Other than that, great job.
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